I think so far in my essay, I am most unsure about my introduction, and how I am going to conclude my essay. So far I am only at the midpoint, which seems unnerving because I feel like I have already made me big points. I would like some feedback on my introduction and whether what I already have on my paper seems to work well with the prompt and requirements, or if any part of explanation is weak or doesn’t connect to the idea as a whole.