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Learning Outcome #6 (sentence-level error)

Learning Outcome #6 (sentence-level error)

Outcome 6 (Sentence-Level Error) – Control sentence-level error (grammar, punctuation, spelling) When I first entered this semester, I was already fairly confident in my ability to formulate grammatically correct sentences, and also use a wide vocabulary. So focusing on this aspect of my writing was not that pressing for me, as I mostly wanted to focus on the content itself. However, I soon discovered after submitting my first essay that I didn’t totally understand proper punctuation for in-line citations. As the following…

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Learning Outcome #5 (document work MLA)

Learning Outcome #5 (document work MLA)

Outcome 5 (Document Work MLA) – Document their work using appropriate conventions (MLA) One thing that I have improved upon drastically in my source integration is the process by which I introduce a work and an author to my audience. While I used to struggle to integrate, and especially introduce sources, through the help of Professor Brod and our classroom discussions, I have found a rhythm in which to do this successfully. I am going to provide examples of this in all…

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Learning Outcome #4 (Peer Review)

Learning Outcome #4 (Peer Review)

Outcome 4 (Peer Review) – Be able to critique their own and others’ work by emphasizing global revision early in the writing process and local revision later in the process. Over the course of this semester I can confidently say that I have become more confident in my peer review work. As we workshopped in class and looked at specific elements of paragraphs, introductions, and conclusions, I began to understand what to look for in my peer’s work, and what questions to…

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Learning Outcome #3 (active reading)

Learning Outcome #3 (active reading)

Outcome 3 (Active Reading) – Employ techniques of active reading, critical reading, and informal reading response for inquiry, learning, and thinking. Throughout the course of this semester my annotation skills have developed from being content based to becoming more engaging with the context, making notes that challenge, extend, and question the text and make connections between other sources, the world, and myself. This has become a new form of annotation that was never really stressed to me in school, as a lot…

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Learning Outcome #2 (integrating ideas)

Learning Outcome #2 (integrating ideas)

Outcome 2 (Integrating Ideas) – Be able to integrate their ideas with others using summary, paraphrase, quotation, analysis, and synthesis of relevant sources. In my first essay draft I received much critique by Professor Brod about the lack of my own voice after quotations. After seeing where I was failing to provide my own voice, I spent much more time the next 2 essays in making sure I was structuring the quotations around my voice, not the other way around. This section…

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Learning Outcome #1 (Recursive Process)

Learning Outcome #1 (Recursive Process)

Outcome 1 (Recursive Process) – Demonstrate the ability to approach writing as a recursive process that requires substantial revision of drafts for content, organization, and clarity (global revision), as well as editing and proofreading (local revision). My ability to approach writing as a recursive process was improved upon this year as the beginning of each essay became a little easier each time. I got into a repetitive rhythm when it came to shaping and developing my essay. I began by first creating…

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Serhan & McLaughlin Reading Response

Serhan & McLaughlin Reading Response

Xenophobia is an intense dislike for another country’s people, specifically the dislike for other or “different” customs, cultures, and languages. This term relates to Covid-19 because the virus originated in China which has lead to the extreme fear and hatred of Asian people. Many governments around the world have used xenophobia to push their own legislations and especially tightening immigration laws of Asian or other foreign people. As people were afraid of this virus we did not know much about,…

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Learning Outcomes

Learning Outcomes

I think the learning outcome that I have most improved in is integrating my own ideas with those of others by use of quotation, summary, paraphrase and analysis. I think this outcome has improved the most for me because of the personal academic writings we have done that require me to integrate both my voice and others’. I think I still struggle to approach writing as a recursive process but perhaps in the process of writing the 3rd essay something…

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Peer Review Revisited

Peer Review Revisited

My 2nd college experience with peer review in this class was a little more successful than the first time. I felt like both me and my partner had a better idea of what to critique and how to give beneficial feedback. My partner gave me specific areas that I could expand my ideas on, which was very helpful for my specific writing challenges. I would rate this time being more helpful than the 1st time.

Barclay Style Paragraph

Barclay Style Paragraph

[C] Alexa’s performance as an employee at CVS makes her the most essential and recognized worker there. [I] Several sources have credited Alexa’s performance at work. [Q] According to shift manager Joshua, “Alexa is our best employee at stocking shelves, and she always does it with a smile.” (3). [E] In other words, Alexa has been recognized as being a hardworking employee that always demonstrates a positive attitude in the workplace. [T] She is not only recognized at the management…

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